Senior Showcase Research: Film Treatment


Here is a look at the first version of my treatment since its development last year. Just so you know, many changes have been made regarding the character's background and how concepts will operate, but this gives you a brief overview of the story. Please enjoy it and let me know what you think! 

A Minute of Your Time

Treatment, [12/15/2023]

Mujahid Muhammad

 

 

Logline: A seasoned filmmaker seeks to waste your time with a series of tasks he wishes to complete, all within a minute of his own. 

 

Synopsis: Doug Reaves is a film student hired to film a show titled: “A Minute of Your Time,” where the object is to demonstrate how much progress can be made within a single minute. The show’s host, Dr. Lou, achieves this by setting a timer with a set number of seconds for every task he seeks to complete. All appears to be going well as they meet every Friday in a theater room to film a total of five episodes of a short series. However, he soon becomes confused when he loses his sense of time while filming. Doug begins to question how much time passes every time Dr. Lou sets his own clock while filming. What he finds after confronting him about it is a man who can control time through hypnosis. The lesson behind this story is a simple one. Time waits for no one, so don’t allow distractions or even people to waste yours

 

Act One:

The story opens with Dr. Lou introducing his show and the purpose behind it. The show is titled: “A Minute of Your Time” and showcases how many small tasks can be done within one. He wishes to make the series only 5 episodes, each exactly a minute in length. Dr. Lou begins every episode by setting a timer for a set number of seconds that range from 10 – 20 seconds before he completes a task. He continues to repeat this process until he reaches 60 seconds and concludes the show. His hired camera guy, Doug Reeves, is new to working with him and doesn’t really get where his film is going, but he still does his job. Lou has scheduled them to meet every Friday in the afternoon to film the project, and Doug follows the agreement with no issues because he’s getting paid, and it doesn’t conflict with his schedule. Doug also spends the weekend editing the video before posting it every Monday on Dr. Lou’s channel.

Act Two:

Doug and Dr. Lou reunite again on Friday as planned and begin to film again. As they film, Doug notices the time to record his show is growing longer than expected despite Dr. Lou still following his own timer. Dr. Lou’s tasks appear to occur longer despite his clock cycles remaining between 10-20 seconds. This strange occurrence leaves Doug perplexed when he realizes how late their filming sessions end without evening having any do-overs and starting in the afternoon. As a result, he decides during their third session to set a timer of his own while recording the show in its entirety. After Dr. Lou leaves, he discovers that his timer ran for several hours despite having only been a “minute” of recorded film time. Extremely alarmed by this, Doug decides to wait until the fourth session before he questions Dr. Lou about this strange phenomenon that occurs while recording.

Act Three:

Friday comes again and the duo gathers in their usual meeting spot to prepare the footage for the fourth video. Unsure how to feel about this, he decides to bring it to Lou’s attention that his video is taking way longer than a minute to record. Lou becomes angered by this and asks him to just be quiet and do his job. This response offends Doug, and he begins to argue that his show is pointless anyway because time moves faster than the time he sets. Lou is taken aback by this response and argues that time is special, and he’ll prove its value the next time they meet. Doug is determined to prove that his point is false through timing the entire session. Once Friday arrives, Doug arrives early to prove that Lou’s theory about time is false. Lou also arrives early, this time with a different demeanor than his normal easy-going personality. He appears to have a trick up his sleeve and Doug is ready to debunk it to the fullest.

Both begin to film the final episode and Doug has his timer currently going as he films. As Dr. Lou runs the same opening dialogue from all his previous episodes, Doug begins to feel an alarming shift in how time moves. Dr. Lou explains this effect is due to hallucination and those who make eye contact with his watch will also experience time in the same duration as the clock runs. Despite the camera having documented 10 seconds, they had already been filming for an hour with still 50 seconds left of recording to finish. Doug starts to panic as he realizes the truth, Dr. Lou simply responds with a laugh, stating that time stands still for him and his timer alone.

 

Character Archetypes:

Dr. Lou (34) is a seasoned filmmaker and Alumni of the film school Mr. Reaves attends. He is currently filming a series where he intentionally seeks to waste the time of his audience watching with clever tricks to keep them engaged. He While those unfamiliar with his work may confuse his behavior with him simply seeking to entertain his audience in a comedic way, he truly believes there’s value in using a timer to help seize the moments that time inevitably forces people to lose. Dr. Lou resides in Washington, DC, and visits his old campus often to gain inspiration for new films he wishes to create.

Doug Reaves (24) is Lou’s hired cameraman and film editor who enjoys doing freelance projects in between his downtime as a film student. He was born and raised in Maryland and seeks to become a filmmaker once he graduates. He originally met his client Dr. Lou while on campus screening another film. While he still agreed to assist as the camera man for his short series, he doesn’t understand the purpose behind why using a timer is so important to Dr. Lou.




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